I enjoyed this

I like the music and the style as they coexist -- very nice.
A re visitation to Christmas's roots and the true holiday spirit?

Ok mate

This flash was pretty funny and I did enjoy it, however I hate how the nose is on the side of the head.

Smile

To start I would like to say that the sheer length of this deserves a 10.
The artwork was very innocent and I feel it fits the theme perfectly - I should probably see the movie at the 100mb to get the full feel, but I am content as is. The music was great as well and for this I am grateful, because bad music can ruin a good animation. . I feel that the plot was heart warming an endearing, truly something to remember and cherish; however, I do feel that it was slightly rushed at points, such as when the girl tried to escape. When she was trying to escape I would have liked maybe 20 seconds more added to the plot, but this is ok. Overall the story was well thought out and right on the money.

I would love to see your work in the future and I believe that I will cherish it too.

Cheers and have a wonderful holiday

TrevorW

very nice

I give you major respect for taking your previous engine and revamping it after you didnt get the result you wanted. Good job at being versatile!

I just vomited

You sir have the sickest most discusting imagination. You made me vomit, and I think this may be the worst thing to ever grace the portal. AND I LOVED IT. So did you use LSD or WEED to think of this one XD

i see

It is very nice to see someone else do this t truly is. I have been messing around with Narrative submissions now since November and no they do not getthe highest scores.

As for the poems the are alright, but you still have room to grow.

Keep trying and learning :)

nice

This is really good, but please be careful.
The major problem with rap today is the bullshit it shovels.
Try to bring your music slightly more down to earth and you will be great.
Tupac was perhaps the best balancer of this, though Imortal Technique does a wonder job of it, as did old NAS.

Decent

This has an oldschool feel but some of the words lack the feel. Some of the ways they speak also lacks the oldschool feel. I still wouldn't call this modern...though it does have modern flair. I think there might actually be a clash in generations.
The words also have limited meaning -- first solo is the strongest.

Decent.

Indeed

What is there to say about this masterpeice, other than this: this work is one of those few gems in a sea of dull rocks. Indeed, this peice should be considered for an award or two. Kudos on the execution of such a pleasure to the ears.

great

Love it

Awh

Cute :D
Reminds me of a poem i wrote once and for that I thank you.

"Lone musician.
Violin in hand.
At heart great ambition.
Beauty made on command."

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OINK!