I enjoyed this
I like the music and the style as they coexist -- very nice.
A re visitation to Christmas's roots and the true holiday spirit?
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I enjoyed this
I like the music and the style as they coexist -- very nice.
A re visitation to Christmas's roots and the true holiday spirit?
Ok mate
This flash was pretty funny and I did enjoy it, however I hate how the nose is on the side of the head.
very nice
I give you major respect for taking your previous engine and revamping it after you didnt get the result you wanted. Good job at being versatile!
I just vomited
You sir have the sickest most discusting imagination. You made me vomit, and I think this may be the worst thing to ever grace the portal. AND I LOVED IT. So did you use LSD or WEED to think of this one XD
i see
It is very nice to see someone else do this t truly is. I have been messing around with Narrative submissions now since November and no they do not getthe highest scores.
As for the poems the are alright, but you still have room to grow.
Keep trying and learning :)
nice
This is really good, but please be careful.
The major problem with rap today is the bullshit it shovels.
Try to bring your music slightly more down to earth and you will be great.
Tupac was perhaps the best balancer of this, though Imortal Technique does a wonder job of it, as did old NAS.
wat u mean bring it down to earth
Decent
This has an oldschool feel but some of the words lack the feel. Some of the ways they speak also lacks the oldschool feel. I still wouldn't call this modern...though it does have modern flair. I think there might actually be a clash in generations.
The words also have limited meaning -- first solo is the strongest.
Decent.
Thanks
Indeed
What is there to say about this masterpeice, other than this: this work is one of those few gems in a sea of dull rocks. Indeed, this peice should be considered for an award or two. Kudos on the execution of such a pleasure to the ears.
great
Love it
Awh
Cute :D
Reminds me of a poem i wrote once and for that I thank you.
"Lone musician.
Violin in hand.
At heart great ambition.
Beauty made on command."
Thank you and it's a really nice poem :)
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