Nicely done
I had a nice laugh from this. :)
Cheers
Nicely done
I had a nice laugh from this. :)
Cheers
A nice try
It was sorta funny, but the animation its self is very beginner from the drawing to the scripting (if any). Looks like alot of tweening to me, but I could be wrong.
keep trying :)
SprintT
Not the same
It jsut wasn't the same I'm sry. It was funny at times, but it lacked ego's charm.
Dreadful
I'm so saddened by this peice. You are a great artist, and you did this so poorly. The whole flash went by to fast compared to the speed of the origional, and the other knock off I have seen. You didn't do the cool drawings like the origional had (eg: middle fingers). I think for who you are you could have done so much better.
Although it is not near what you could do, nor the quality of flash the other two,I have seen, you did make is smooth; although the smoothness of the flash can not make up for the head ache the sound caused. Plain and simple the sound was really bad, the same tone for the most part, and it also lacked.
Not to mention you cut a bit of the format out, which could work, but in this case it just did not. Please do not turn your self into makign flashed like this, you are a great author and I would hate to see your skill not be used to what it can be.
Please don't take this ofensivly I mean no disrespect, but this just isn't up to your quality of work.
-SprintT
Well, although you are disappointed in my one days work of fun, i am thrilled to see that you, a 15-year-old know it all, has lived up to the expectations of others by taking yourself way too seriously and missing the big picture when it comes to the difference between a produciton piece and messing around. You need to lighten up. Your asshole may turn inside out if you pinch too tight.
review
-All out of 10-
Artwork::::::5:(decent)
Plot::::::::::::4:(falling, ok that can be good)
music:::::::::0:(Lack of)
Animation::3:(some)
Creativity:::4:(kinda cute)
Final:17/50
Vote:: 0/5
Comment:
Bumping this up to a score of 2.
Keep trying
SprintT
ok....
This was good for a test, but don't submit tests here. When you finish the whole thing ill rate it to, just PM me.
review
-All out of 10-
Artwork::::::4:(decent)
Plot::::::::::::1:(he kills a cat so what)
music:::::::::3:(eh ok)
Animation::1:(not much in this)
Creativity:::0:(I can't give you points for this)
Final:9/50
Vote:: 0/5
Comment:
Im going to vote a 1 even though this feel below what is need,since you tried atleast.
Keep trying
review
-All out of 10-
Artwork::::::0:(just words moving and inserted movie clips)
Plot::::::::::::2:(pointless)
music:::::::::3:(dont like)
Animation::3:(needs work)
Creativity:::0:(I can't give you points for this)
Final:8/50
Vote:: 0/5
Comment:
More of something to blog, than submit to NG.
Keep trying
SprintT
hum getting there
Well, you are get getting there, but things need alot fo work still.
Why does the graphics not fill the page, and look like they are made with ms paint.
You need to put good programs to work in the artwork, I cna see you can draw alright, so why not?
Artwork: 0
Plot: 2 (getting better)
music: 7 (not going to effect your score unless made by you)
Animation: 3
So a random 5 or so frame dance is half the animation? Please spend more time on these, and you will get there.
SprintT
Well
Guessing by the fact that this passed the portal, and is only a pic of a girl? I would say that you switched it after it made it. Kudos on cheating the system, If your other flash got a 2.5 why would you do that though?
Unless I am wrong and there is more, ill admit after around a min of the pic I closed it.
SprintT
tihs passed fair n square, kidd0
an its not jus any girl its a sassy c hick
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