This is really good, but please be careful.
The major problem with rap today is the bullshit it shovels.
Try to bring your music slightly more down to earth and you will be great.
Tupac was perhaps the best balancer of this, though Imortal Technique does a wonder job of it, as did old NAS.
wat u mean bring it down to earth
This has an oldschool feel but some of the words lack the feel. Some of the ways they speak also lacks the oldschool feel. I still wouldn't call this modern...though it does have modern flair. I think there might actually be a clash in generations.
The words also have limited meaning -- first solo is the strongest.
What is there to say about this masterpeice, other than this: this work is one of those few gems in a sea of dull rocks. Indeed, this peice should be considered for an award or two. Kudos on the execution of such a pleasure to the ears.
I love the fighting of the different styles. All together sounds awsome.
Simplisity is the key to many of emotions and I think this fits well. It also will work for a simple peice I made. Nice
I wrote a review for you flash piece too :) thanks a bunch man.
Clicks or not this piece is brilliant. mind you those clicks are almost unnoticeable, but I listened to this song 30 times to get the feel for a poem that I wrote to go with it. So if you don't mind I wish to post it here for you to check out :D If ya like it you can put it with the song if ya like :D I might use the song myself for a narrative flash :3
The ancient grass bristles,
The horizon beckons,
The wind whistles,
All is still for those seconds.
Upon the ground lies
A brother to his people,
A man of great stature, and size.
Lost in the fight,
Yet gaining true glory.
Death for the Norseman's plight
This man needs no story.
Within all small or large,
The tale remains within all.
Of the brave chief's charge.
Actually I already began to have the choir sing words (yes software can do that) to the melody and the solo part when I was first composing the song. But that takes weeks to do and probably won't make it to the deadline, so I'm stuck with this current version. But if you want to make a narrative flash be my guest. :p I no nothing on animating or creation in flash, so that burden is all you. :p
Thanks for the review. :D
I took this peice differently then intended. I took it as the fire being his passion, and him being alone with this passion (music). A young artist full of ambition.
By the Light of the Fire
Violin in hand.
At heart great ambition.
Beauty made on command.
Again an amazing song!
A poem to go with it :D
What I got out of this peace:
"True Warriors Death"
A sorrow end
A blissful peace
A great rest death would lend
Great burden this would release
Years spent toiling over sword and shield.
A kind hearted fighter.
A man that knew not how to yield.
Of his own destiny he was the writer.
Yet as all stories must this man's ended, in death.
To that of the cold hand of the reaper.
A word of gratitude was the last breath.
For now equality was his keeper.
quite the knack for forming those rhymes eh SprintT?! Quite impressive if I do say so myself.
I can only hope every warrior finds peace one their death bed. Too many end up alone, surrounded by a thick wall of anger and hatred they use to defend themselves against the pains of taking life.
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
What can I say that I havent said to you directly. This is an amazing peice, and I can't wait to finish the poem.
Looking forward to it SprintT! Thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
Made me laugh bud :)
Although songs kinda need more then that XD
Keep it up.
yeah I know what you mean
I was trying to make it as stupid as possible
maybe I might actually try to do something serious that people would actually like
but we shall see
Thank you for your review!
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